Wednesday 5 March 2014

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The Grey Paper Plane
It was a dark and stormy night in Avensdale as a grey paper plane drifted through the streets. A small girl named Eliza was out observing the small of Avensdale as the grey paper plane whizzed by. Eliza made an attempting leap and grasped the grey paper plane in her fragile hands. The plane being crinkled from the wind, Elize carefully unraveled the paper plane to see some writing, something to look  like a note. Little Eliza skimmed her eyes across the text as it slipped from her soft hand and away down Elersly street. Further down the street the paper flew, with Eliza following. Over a bridge, across a road, down a hill and into dark ally. Round the corner and... WHOOSH! the note slammed against a red brick wall, sucking the life from the unraveled paper plane. Eliza stopped, to read the rest of the message. It read..." Follow this paper and you will see a small door, Go Inside..." The paper once again slipped from hot hands and through a trap door that had suddenly appeared before her eyes. A force was pulling Eliza closer, she was startled and let out a scream, to hear no noise. Eliza put all her strength into trying to pull free, but she did not budge from the strong force. She closed her eyes tight, wishing it was all a dream. Her eyes opened to see she was in a small room with the walls closing in on her. Eliza was trapped, or though she thought. A rope stood before her, but she was too busy sobbing to lay her eyes on it. Eliza jumps up and climbs the rope but the next thing she sees is.. her house? This cant be right! Her mums voice floods into the room and Eliza turns round to hug her, Nothing, she turns round again to be sure, Eliza looks up, down up... wait. Eliza's eyes skim down again to see a minuscule, slimy, slim object slowly shuffling towards her. Eliza is too creeped to think, so she lowers herself back into the inclosing room, to see that the floor level had become higher. Her brain had just caught up to her, and Eliza remembers that the walls had probably closed by now. there is enough room to stand on top of the walls. She quarter turns and her eyes come across a hallway. The letter falls before her, but the writing was different. It read" Through one of the following three doors down this hall is a way back to your house in Avensdale, behind the other two will be some... interesting surprises. Eliza steps forward and chooses door 2.  She twists the door knob, before it opened, she heard a growl.  Getting interested she opens the door to come face to face with an orange and black hungry looking tiger. Slamming the door she runs into door one.  Opening her eyes, she sees a shelf of candy.  She unwraps a green and yellow candy piece and takes a bite, but to her surprise she grows a dragon tail.  Totally freaked, she shoves lots of candy into her mouth until she gets the right one. Eliza turns into a monkey, snake, bird, ant, Eliza, pineapple. Wait, Eliza! She ate the same piece of candy she ate before and becomes herself once more. Walking into the hall again she stands in front of the one door she hasn't entered it, door 3. She slowly enters. There is a ladder. Eliza steps five bars up, ten, twenty, fifty, then she reaches the top to see the same as before in Avensdale. She turns around, the trap door is gone. Eliza is finally home and she is the happiest girl on Earth.  The End....for now.
By Holly


5 comments:

  1. This story is so creative! I must do some researching on these words!

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  2. Thanks Joseph!

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  3. I loved your story Holly. It was very interesting and it was a fun story. You did a great job!

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  4. WOW! what a good story.
    You should get it published in a real book!

    Teno Pai Rawa!

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  5. This is one of the best stories that I have read in the world! If you keep that up you might get a job as an author. There were also heaps of really interesting words.
    :) :} :>

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