Thursday 27 March 2014

A Perfect Autumn Day writing by Amy A

A Perfect Autumn Day

Above me the glistening blue sky is shining on the lush green grass.
Below me is the soft, damp, spongy green grass twinkling in the sun.
In front of me are the colourful, deciduous gnarly trees, with all their tilted and crooked branches.
Behind me is the boiling sun shining on my back, making a dark dark shadow.

Amy A.
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5 comments:

  1. Anonymous2 April 2014 at 00:29

    great job Amy A. I liked how you used lots of adjectives

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  2. Anonymous2 April 2014 at 00:32

    Amy A. I liked how you used lots of adjectives to describe your poem

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  3. Charlotte N2 April 2014 at 22:09

    That created a very big picture in my head! Nice vocabulary. I loved the descriptive writing and hope to see another poem!

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  4. Anonymous3 April 2014 at 00:31

    That was an awesome poem Amy A. I liked how you used lots of describing word to make your poem interesting.

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  5. Peyton19 May 2014 at 15:17

    Nice story Amy! I love all the adjectives and it created a big picture in my head. I will enjoy reading your poems. Maybe you could become a writer.

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