Tuesday 25 February 2014

Haiku poems

Two Haiku poems by Holly:

Winter
Frosty Breeze Flowing
Soft White Snow Throughout The Land
Snowflakes Frolicking


Spring
Blossoming Flowers
Lush Grass Waving In The Wind
Fresh Environment


4 comments:

  1. We really liked how you have used great adjectives. It made us feel the coldness. Your Spring poem used great adjectives too, however we were wondering what does 'lush' mean?

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  2. Wow! Good job Holly. You used lots of great adjectives. But I've got a question, which poem is your favourite?

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    1. Thanks, Joseph! :-)
      my favourite poem is probobly my winter poem because i love how it makes you feel and picture the poem in your mind

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  3. Love your poems Holly.

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